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Old 06-21-2008, 10:19 AM   #1 (permalink)
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and Luigi's fine, I just like to write sad poems

The Rains

And the rains come
He of the four legs
With the tri-color fur
And the slightly bent tail
Was not typical of his kind
While others frolicked in the sun
He loved to gallop in the rain
Never wanting to journey inside
When he did, he'd give a mighty shake
And spread the wetness all over the room
Now, when it rains, I instinctively reach for his leash
Only to remember he's moved on
Then I do some raining of my own

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Old 06-21-2008, 11:05 AM   #2 (permalink)
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What a very sweet poem. But Whew, thank goodness Luigi is fine. I hope he stays that way for a long time.
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Old 06-21-2008, 12:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm glad you prefaced that with 'and Luigi's fine'. Great writing, but man, that is dark!
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Old 06-21-2008, 01:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Great poem. The ending line really hits the spot.
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Beautiful poem.



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Old 06-26-2008, 07:43 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 06-29-2008, 06:27 AM   #7 (permalink)
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This is not a (poem per se)...but Goober has nearly outlived
my Cockateil Gorromino that lived for 16 & a 1/2 years! Goober is nearly as old & will likely outlive him! Both of them had
their elder destructive phase... but Goober is now a very mellow seniour beag!
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